Also, Rarity has 6 eyelashes on the top part of her eye. If youre going to do Rarity you should always keep in mind small details like such. You also got her hair gradient wrong. It's inside out. Raritys body is not white, it's more of a cream. Just sayin'.
A comment from someone, "The muzzle's a little long. It seems more like a stylistic choice than a mistake, and the style's got quite a bit of potential (I've got quite the soft spot for unique styles), but it seems like it needs a little more polishing. But the eye is absolutely breathtaking. It's the crown jewel of the piece by far. Amazing detail and color."